tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post6985390409943842415..comments2024-03-18T08:14:08.610-05:00Comments on Southern Princess: Dream Sequence Blogfest!!Courtney Barr - The Southern Princesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14455508477182984039noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-307387451072264492010-06-07T18:01:33.043-05:002010-06-07T18:01:33.043-05:00Kris & Kels -thank you so much for stopping by...Kris & Kels -thank you so much for stopping by! I am glad you enjoyed the sequence - I toyed with that concept for a moment but it just felt right so I left it in - happy that you liked it! ;o)<br /><br />Hayley - lol I am SO glad you enjoyed it! I plan to set it aside for a later project idea (but of course ideas are already floating around my head) Thank you so much for your sweet comment!<br /><br />Elizabeth - I loved your entry! It was a great read. Thank you so much for stopping by mine. I am ecstatic that you enjoyed it and wanted more - thank you for such a sweet comment. As always a pleasure to see you in the Kingdom.<br /><br />Tessa - Thank you so much for your kind comment. Again, like I told Stu, pace can be something I have to work on sometimes so I am glad this worked smoothly for my readers. I appreciate you stopping by the Kingdom! ;o)<br /><br />KM - I am with you! Humid air totally makes a scene thick with mystery & darkness. It also makes the South thick with sweat and stickiness...;o) I am so glad you enjoyed the entry and thank you so much for stopping by! ;o)<br /><br />Raquel - Always a pleasure to see you in the Kingdom! I am glad you enjoyed it and that the ending caught you offguard and kept you interested! ;o)<br /><br />Sharon -lol thank you thank you thank you! It is always a pleasure to see a reader react with the want to continue a story. It means I hooked you! ;o) So glad you enjoyed it and a pleasure to see you in the Kingdom!<br /><br />Lydia - Pleasure to meet you too! WELCOME TO THE KINGDOM!! ;o) I am so glad you found my crazy world and that you enjoyed the entry. Thank you so much for your kind words ;o) I look forward to seeing you in the Kingdom ;o)<br /><br />Stu - Thank you so much! Often I worry that my pace can get off - thank you for letting me know that here it worked! I appreciate your comment and it is a pleasure to welcome you to the Kingdom <br /><br />Dawn - Thank you for your kind words. I am so happy you enjoyed it. It was a pleasure to see you in the Kingdom today ;o)Courtney Barr - The Southern Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14455508477182984039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-33506396570716666252010-06-07T18:01:33.044-05:002010-06-07T18:01:33.044-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Courtney Barr - The Southern Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14455508477182984039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-33562155286214327942010-06-06T15:47:44.691-05:002010-06-06T15:47:44.691-05:00Nice work here. That's a different approach wi...Nice work here. That's a different approach with the veil aspect and I really enjoyed it. And the consequence of the dream makes it even better.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-62915855690028771692010-06-05T15:21:45.452-05:002010-06-05T15:21:45.452-05:00This is so awesome :) I like that she can't wa...This is so awesome :) I like that she can't wake up so he has to make her.. very cool idea.<br /><br /><3 Kelsey LeighKris n' Kelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15273239971556065096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-31012795033792846232010-06-05T10:31:40.965-05:002010-06-05T10:31:40.965-05:00This dream sequence is very intriguing. Amazing o...This dream sequence is very intriguing. Amazing on the fly.<br /><br />I want to know more.Amber Lynaehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16890268873178010212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-27532277843551505482010-06-04T22:36:23.951-05:002010-06-04T22:36:23.951-05:00Oh my God this was amazing, it was supper intense ...Oh my God this was amazing, it was supper intense and I'm so intrigued I just want to read more! Nice job!Hayley Lovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16786674202167099600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-8305482299041796392010-06-04T20:26:10.563-05:002010-06-04T20:26:10.563-05:00Oooh!!! I like and want more! Very intriguing inde...Oooh!!! I like and want more! Very intriguing indeed! I want to know who Z I H is! I love how you describe how his voice sounds--very clear. And, I love this: "darkness colors the walls"<br /><br />*Sigh* I just love expressive prose like that, I'm a huge fan of that!<br /><br />Thanks for dropping by and reading my dream sequence! ;)Elizabeth Muellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06028099814857743134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-87606382622582784542010-06-04T18:23:26.404-05:002010-06-04T18:23:26.404-05:00Awesome - I was pulling for her to wake up in time...Awesome - I was pulling for her to wake up in time! :)Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-87748834362798094892010-06-04T18:18:12.969-05:002010-06-04T18:18:12.969-05:00This was really interesting! I want to know more a...This was really interesting! I want to know more about this mysterious dark dream figure who can't protect her beyond the veil. Definitely sucked me in!<br /><br />Thanks for participating!! I hope you do more with this :)Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-671685129500856362010-06-04T17:44:32.438-05:002010-06-04T17:44:32.438-05:00You set a great pace here, it's a really smoot...You set a great pace here, it's a really smooth read! It's a bit eerie, too...*shivers*Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-90102244103204653742010-06-04T14:18:17.920-05:002010-06-04T14:18:17.920-05:00Super intense...in a good way. :) I hate those dre...Super intense...in a good way. :) I hate those dreams where you know you're dreaming and you want to wake up but can't. I really like the added effect of the humid air; to me, that always means bad things. Something about it - maybe the way it presses against your lungs and makes you sweat - just screams "forboding" to me. lolKatiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06851403823244758904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-44609256317780114162010-06-04T13:43:01.723-05:002010-06-04T13:43:01.723-05:00I loved your dream sequence. The pace, description...I loved your dream sequence. The pace, description and the imagery. The idea of the veil and the not- without-consequences help.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-83564185885902479122010-06-04T13:41:57.486-05:002010-06-04T13:41:57.486-05:00Ooo, well done Courtney. I always love reading you...Ooo, well done Courtney. I always love reading your writing. And I feel so bad that I haven't been by your blog very much lately. I miss it. Can you ever forgive me?????Shannon Messengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08003607156860716462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-51408036506076176572010-06-04T11:47:10.594-05:002010-06-04T11:47:10.594-05:00"the darkness that I took back with me was mo..."the darkness that I took back with me was more than a nightmare" That was a great way to show the lingering dread she wakes up with. Great sequence...the ending was surprising and made me want to read more.<br /><br />Great job.Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-87242441182856180592010-06-04T11:30:18.762-05:002010-06-04T11:30:18.762-05:00No no no--you can't leave it there!! That was ...No no no--you can't leave it there!! That was awesome writing. I crave more. ;-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-33315728086040924332010-06-04T11:09:00.361-05:002010-06-04T11:09:00.361-05:00Nice! I'm really bad at dream sequences. Grrr....Nice! I'm really bad at dream sequences. Grrr. I just found your blog today. Nice to meet you!Lydia Kanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00484415427764822386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-34070263082309088042010-06-04T10:30:11.487-05:002010-06-04T10:30:11.487-05:00Wow, you sucked me in. I hope you take this idea f...Wow, you sucked me in. I hope you take this idea farther. ZIH? Now I have to know who he is and their connection. Don't forget about this lovely start, store it away if needed, but come back to it. You have something great here.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-29651168122368464662010-06-04T10:03:02.399-05:002010-06-04T10:03:02.399-05:00I love the flow of this, the quiet menace of it.I love the flow of this, the quiet menace of it.stuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16388674850920848503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-28567588184786627772010-06-04T09:19:58.594-05:002010-06-04T09:19:58.594-05:00LOL. I was thinkin' the same thing as Wendy. B...LOL. I was thinkin' the same thing as Wendy. But I did love this scene. <br /><br />Totally missed the memo about this fest but I've been slacking on the blog front lately.kahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10789825860272178765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-4169041558788198742010-06-04T08:06:15.904-05:002010-06-04T08:06:15.904-05:00Eerie! Awesome stuff done on the fly!! :)Eerie! Awesome stuff done on the fly!! :)DL Hammonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02007260062331783715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-38307626462005808892010-06-04T08:03:59.302-05:002010-06-04T08:03:59.302-05:00You have such a way with words when you craft a pi...You have such a way with words when you craft a piece. Your imagery and description are so good I'm jealous. Needless to say, I really liked this. :)sarahjayne smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589820347348973092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-38354439841365961772010-06-04T04:20:37.628-05:002010-06-04T04:20:37.628-05:00What's with you and Megan and the arm burning?...What's with you and Megan and the arm burning? ;-)<br /><br /><br />(If you're not familiar with Megan, check out below:<br />http://meganrebekahblogs.blogspot.com)Wendy Ramer, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17430380409796887696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-63357875716655681802010-06-04T01:12:05.797-05:002010-06-04T01:12:05.797-05:00Great. Like Poe's "Dream Within A Dream.&...Great. Like Poe's "Dream Within A Dream." RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4435062275537032044.post-66594734941740426602010-06-04T00:15:18.094-05:002010-06-04T00:15:18.094-05:00ZIH? Noooooooooo!
It's never really a dream......ZIH? Noooooooooo!<br />It's never really a dream...is it....<br />Nice!Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.com